I say we ban slavery, have you seen how slaves were treated, being a slave was a hard and miserable life to be in. Image you had a slave and you have been treating it badly and the slave finally gain it’s freedom and become a very successful person, and you went and ask for help to him/her, would you think him/her would want to help you, no cause how badly you have been treating it, and image how you would feel if you were separated from your family and would never see them again cause that’s how a slave feel like. We should be proud that we have a mother that would kiss you good night or a father who would read you bedtime stories before you went to sleep, because a slave didn't have that so we are very lucky. Slaves were treated like animals, no care, no love, no nothing just hatred. We are so lucky that having slaves is banned, what if, just what if slavery wasn't banned and this mainly goes out to the girls and you were sold to a man image what the man would want you to do just image, pretty bad aye because people's attitude before was way better and different from attitudes nowadays. We shouldn't have slaves to do things for us, that’s why god gave us hands, legs and a body, to do things ourselves and you wouldn't wannabe a slave who would have to wrap the poo off someone’s bottom or bath a person or dress up someone cause I know I wouldn't want to. I've been a slave once and I know how it feels like to be one. People shouldn't be treated like slaves because we ain't animal we are human being and we have the right to be one.
Renee @ Tamaki Primary School
I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Ms Ah Kui.
Tuesday, 4 March 2014
Monday, 16 December 2013
Netbook Reflection 2013.
This is my reflection about how my netbook has helped me this year and how I have benefited off of it.
Thursday, 5 December 2013
Gospel College.
A group of students and teachers from Gospel College came to our school, to thanks ourselves for making the dream school come true. They preformed to us, and sang lots of Fijian songs. The students of Tamaki Primary enjoyed the performances, there was laughter and joy filled in the hall. They taught us games. We also got to know their names and get to know them well. They taught us how to speak some Fijian word.
Thursday, 28 November 2013
Lean On Me
WALT use our analysing skills.
Success Criteria:
- Part of the songWhat is the main idea(s) in this part of the song?Give an example from the text that supports this idea.Give another example from the text that supports this idea.Express your viewpoint by synthesising what you have analysed.-Do you agree with this part of the song? Why/why not?Verse 1SalomeThe main idea is about That there is always a reason to live for.Sometimes in our livesWe all have painWe all have sorrow
But if we are wiseWe know that there's always tomorrow
Yes we agree. Because it’s expressing about life.It shows that people do suffer in silenceChorus
The main idea in the chorus is Support, Physical support for your friends.“Lean on me, when you’re not strong, And I’ll be your friend, I’ll help you carry on..”“Till i'm gonna need somebody to lean on”Yes we agree. This is because you need to Support a friend no matter what! Lean on them through tough times...And be by there side.Verse 2The main idea is about its okay to ask for help and telling friends when you need it.“Please swallow your pride if I have things you need to borrow”
"for no one can fillthose of your needsthat you won’t let show
I agree with this because, we can ask a friend for help, and maybe your friends will notice how sad you are and come and help us. There is always someone there to help you.Verse 3The main idea is being a caring friend and showing love.“So just call on me brother when you need a hand”“We all need somebody to lean on”Yes we agree,because being able to help people that are in need of help it’s okay to be there for them.Verse 4
The main idea in this verse is helping.If there is a load! you have to barethat you can't carry
I'm right up the road,I'm share your load.Yes I agree with this, because when you are sad or having problems there is always someone there to help you when you feel like no one will help you and when you lose hope.
Tuesday, 26 November 2013
The World’s Greatest by R.Kelly
WALT use our analysing skills.
Part of the song
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What is the main idea(s) in this part of the song?
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Give an example from the text that supports this idea.
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Give another example from the text that supports this idea.
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Express your viewpoint by synthesising what you have analysed.
-Do you agree with this part of the song? Why/why not?
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Verse 1
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The main idea in the first verse is I am me.
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Oh, I am a vision
And I can can see clearly.
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If anybody asks you who I am, just stand up tall look em in the face and say.
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I agree that we all see yourself in the future, and don’t let anyone judge you for your appearance.
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Chorus
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The chorus main idea is about believing in yourself and being your own strength.
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“I’m that little bit of hope when my backs against the rope”
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“Hey,I made it I’m the worlds greatest”
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I agree that we all have to be our own strength because if our strength is with someone else what would happen to us when we need it.So by seeing ourselves as unique things we can support ourselves.
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Verse 2
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The main idea in the second verse is I am who I am
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“I am a giant,
I am an eagle
I am a lion down in the jungle..”
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“If anybody asks look ‘em in the face and say..”
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Yes I agree. This is because it explains who he is and gaining strength to stand up for yourself no matter what others say.
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Verse 3
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Striving to achieve and love all that is around you
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“In the ring of life, I’ll reign love”
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“use a success you’ll find in me”
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I agree because it defines the pain that people sacrifice to strive to achieve what they wanted and that they’ll share the world with love.
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Verse 4
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Don’t let any put down, pull you down.
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“And faith was right there to pull me through”
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“I am that little bit of hope”
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I agree that we shouldn't be pull down just because of words, but there are friends out there that can help us.
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A Letter To My 16 Year Old Self.
Dear Myself (16 years old),
I am writing this from the year of 2013, when I am 16 years old. First I want to give you an advice, just three words: don't take drugs. I hope you listen to my advice, I have given you. I hope you have a good friends, so they won't influences you to do bad things. I hope you focus more on your education. If you are making bad decision, I want you to do be that person, be someone who is kind, nice and always chose the right things. I hope you do well in the future. Sorry if this is a short letter.
Love Yourself,
Renee
Love Yourself,
Renee
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