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Friday, 5 July 2013

My Narrative Writing

One sunny day, my friend Alex and I were walking to the shopping mall, then suddenly we notice that we were standing in the middle of a picture, surrounded with cultural arts. While we were standing in the middle of the picture, an old man appeared from nowhere, and said,
“How dare you stepped in the circle of cultural!”said the old man.
“This old thing.”replied Alex.
“Stop Alex, you are making him more angry.”I replied.
“Who cares” answered Alex


The old man started to speak a different kind of language and dancing funny, then the old man said  I have put a curse on you(pointing at Alex). Alex laughed and said that’s a lie, but this wasn't funny. I became more worried about Alex. We walk to one of the famous shopping malls, Alex had a lot of fun, but I didn't I kept on thinking about the curse that the old man put on Alex, as we were walking I was waiting for something to happen, but nothing happen.


I dropped Alex to her house, and stayed there for an hour, to see if anything happen in those passed few minutes I stayed there, nothing happened, then I realize that curse only happen at night, so I rang my mom and ask if I could sleep over in Alex’s house, my mom said yes. I went and get my stuff, ran back to Alex’s house.


I went to Alex’s bedroom. I waited and then waited and then  waited, suddenly I heard a glass fall. I ran to the kitchen and saw Alex standing there. I said to her if she’s alright. She turned around and I saw that she started to have a fat face. I panicked as I looked at her face, then she started to have spotty things on her face. She couldn't even talk her mouth was full of bubbles.


As I grabbed the knife, someone said stop. I stopped and looked at him and said don’t this is a prank. Alex changed back to her normal self.
“How did you do that”.I said
“We told Alex to eat the food that she is allergic to, so she could look like this.” answered James.
“And who was the old man.”I said.  
“My Uncle.”laughed James.


After our conversation finish, we started to laugh and talk about jokes, than I said why did they put  the prank on me,but not someone else. It’s because I  kept on being worried about them. From that day onward I promised my friends that I won’t be worried about them. And even up to now I still keep that promise I made to my friends.


The Two Drama Queen

One windy day, the leaves were flying in the air and the sun was in the sky shining. My cousin Mary and I were going to the zoo. It was field trip day. My cousin Mary forgot her permission form, she ask me if I could sign it for her. I know it was the wrong thing to do, but I had this feeling to sign it. So I signed her permission form.

We went inside of the bus and sat down on the seats at the very back. People started to look at us, then we saw three girl, all trying to be pretty and wearing jewel around there neck and hands. It seems like they were heading towards us, they stopped in front of us and look at us, as it may seem we did something wrong.
“What are you doing in our seats?” said one of the girls.
“Your seat.”answered Mary.
“Yeah,our seats what are you doing in our seats.”She said.
“Oh,I’m sorry I didn’t know barbie dolls sat here.”insulted Mary.
“Why I …”
“Stop Arguing”said one of the girls.
Interrupting the other one.

She seems nice than the other two girls, she didn’t wanna look pretty, she didn’t wear any jewel. She was like a tomboy like us. The other two girls got mad and turn around and sit at a nearby seat. The girl that stopped the fight introduce herself.
“Hi my name is Tracy”said Tracy
“My name is Alex and this is my cousin Mary.”I answered
“Nice to meet you.”said Mary
“Would you like to sit with us?”I asked.
“Sure.”replied Tracy.

She sat beside me and the the other two girls kept on looking at us, in an angry face. We got to the zoo and look at different animals, we reach a section that was dark, the zookeeper on the light. We saw a strange looking animal. It was the strangest thing I ever seen. It had parts of different animals. It had a body of a tiger and a head of a eagle.

Mary,Tracy and I think it was cool, then all of a sudden we heard someone calling our name, we looked around but didn’t see that person who's calling our name. We turn and look at the animal and he said
“Hey, it’s me who is calling your names.”
We freaked out and said that’s cool.

It was only us who can hear him. All of a sudden the two drama queens came and bully us and call us names and bad stuff. I animal became mad and said there is a table over there full of pie, should we throw pies at them, we looked at each other and smiled, yes. The animal distracted the teachers.

Mary, Tracy and I got the pies and threw it on the two drama queens and we asked everyone to join. We all throw pies at the two drama queens and singing.
“Happy Birthday to me, I went to the zoo and saw two monkeys and that was you two!”(pointing at the two drama queen).We all sang

Once we finished, we told the animal to stop distracting the teachers, the teachers came and said what happen, we all point at the two drama queen. The two drama queen had to clean up the mess. Once they finish cleaning up,they still had their pride and walked out of them room with their pointy noses in the air.We all got back on the bus and had a great laugh and never forgot the moment we met the animal and what he told us to do.