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Friday, 5 July 2013

The Two Drama Queen

One windy day, the leaves were flying in the air and the sun was in the sky shining. My cousin Mary and I were going to the zoo. It was field trip day. My cousin Mary forgot her permission form, she ask me if I could sign it for her. I know it was the wrong thing to do, but I had this feeling to sign it. So I signed her permission form.

We went inside of the bus and sat down on the seats at the very back. People started to look at us, then we saw three girl, all trying to be pretty and wearing jewel around there neck and hands. It seems like they were heading towards us, they stopped in front of us and look at us, as it may seem we did something wrong.
“What are you doing in our seats?” said one of the girls.
“Your seat.”answered Mary.
“Yeah,our seats what are you doing in our seats.”She said.
“Oh,I’m sorry I didn’t know barbie dolls sat here.”insulted Mary.
“Why I …”
“Stop Arguing”said one of the girls.
Interrupting the other one.

She seems nice than the other two girls, she didn’t wanna look pretty, she didn’t wear any jewel. She was like a tomboy like us. The other two girls got mad and turn around and sit at a nearby seat. The girl that stopped the fight introduce herself.
“Hi my name is Tracy”said Tracy
“My name is Alex and this is my cousin Mary.”I answered
“Nice to meet you.”said Mary
“Would you like to sit with us?”I asked.
“Sure.”replied Tracy.

She sat beside me and the the other two girls kept on looking at us, in an angry face. We got to the zoo and look at different animals, we reach a section that was dark, the zookeeper on the light. We saw a strange looking animal. It was the strangest thing I ever seen. It had parts of different animals. It had a body of a tiger and a head of a eagle.

Mary,Tracy and I think it was cool, then all of a sudden we heard someone calling our name, we looked around but didn’t see that person who's calling our name. We turn and look at the animal and he said
“Hey, it’s me who is calling your names.”
We freaked out and said that’s cool.

It was only us who can hear him. All of a sudden the two drama queens came and bully us and call us names and bad stuff. I animal became mad and said there is a table over there full of pie, should we throw pies at them, we looked at each other and smiled, yes. The animal distracted the teachers.

Mary, Tracy and I got the pies and threw it on the two drama queens and we asked everyone to join. We all throw pies at the two drama queens and singing.
“Happy Birthday to me, I went to the zoo and saw two monkeys and that was you two!”(pointing at the two drama queen).We all sang

Once we finished, we told the animal to stop distracting the teachers, the teachers came and said what happen, we all point at the two drama queen. The two drama queen had to clean up the mess. Once they finish cleaning up,they still had their pride and walked out of them room with their pointy noses in the air.We all got back on the bus and had a great laugh and never forgot the moment we met the animal and what he told us to do.

Wednesday, 26 June 2013

My Buddy And I.

Today is Tuakana Teina day with Room 4. This mean coming together and working with a student from another class. The buddy that I am working with is Arizona. She thinking netbook is cool and fun, Arizona like playing games and writing stories in netbook.
                                       By Arizona and Renee.



Tuesday, 18 June 2013

Renee&Simon's Current Events.


This is a presentation about how the All Blacks vs France, and there are some good questions in this event.

Tuesday, 11 June 2013

American Football League.


This is a presentation about P.E, this are some skills that room 7 have in American Football League.

Thursday, 6 June 2013

My 6 Thinking Hats.


Me and my partner made this presentation about a plane being launch without a pilot.

My Weekly Poem.



WALT read a poem and analyse the language features of a poem. This will help us think poetically so that we can write a similar poem to share with others.

Friends come and go,
But the future is something you will never know,
So lets stay close to the people who we love,
And never let them go like a flying dove,
When we are lost, or are feeling scared,
A friend is someone who is always there,
So thanks my friends who have stood by me,
And i will love you like a sister, for eternity.


1. Summarise the poem you have read in your own words.
  • The poem I read this week is about friendship and the author is describing her/his best friend.

2. Identify at least 2 different language features in the poem and give examples. 
You can identify more than 2 language features.

  • One of the language features in this poem is a rhyming words. Here is an example of this language feature
    So lets stay close to the people who we love,

                                            And never let them go like a flying dove,
  • Another language feature in this poem is a emotional words .Here is an example of this language feature
    So thanks my friends who have stood by me,

                                                 And i will love you like a sister, for eternity.

3. Evaluate (which means reflect and give your opinion) the author’s purpose for writing this poem - in your answers include the words: inform, entertain, persuade.

  • By analysing the poem I have read this week I think the author wrote this poem is to remember our friends.
  • The author was informing the audience about friendship.
  • The author was entertaining the audience by emotional languages
    The author is trying to persuade the audience to believe what he/she said.